Might as well start Short Story Month off with a great one, right? Actually, the hope is that all of the stories read this month will be great, or at least close to it. This story, "what begins with bird", is the title story from Noy Holland's collection, what begins with bird (FC2, 2005).
Holland's writing is meant to be read aloud. Perhaps as we transition from National Poetry Month to Short Story Month, the selection of her work to lead us off is an appropriate one as each and every word that ends up typed onto the pages is necessary, and has a rhythm with the words both before and after it. This particular story has a new mother being visited by her sister, one not quite right, and one that she has always looked after. Leading to the conflict of whom to watch over, and how guilty to feel over not watching over the other.
Her work also utilizes imagery with great success, as she explores relationships with her prose. Here we have her describing a C-section:
This was the sound of a hand wedged in, and then the small bent head popped free, quick as a tooth you are losing. This that I felt backed into my throat was the body shoved into the cage of my ribs, brief, and how surprising: the rest had seemed so distant: a ditch cut into a distant slab, spongy and geologic, marsh, a bowl of softened bone. Then the baby, the bawling sight of him; then the staples driven in."
Another example of her prose, one I believe shows the importance of rhythm or cadence to her writing:
Read through that a couple of times and do so out loud. You'll be amazed at the rhythm you begin to automatically read with. This combination of cadence, and language, and delving into relationships, and almost a bit of a Southern Gothic feel to her work makes Noy Holland a writer to read.
Here is a link to the beginning of this story published online as well.


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