Another nice effort to be found in the new elimae is Alicia Gifford's Black Widow. Another short fiction (167 words), Gifford packs a punch for sure.
Opening with: "There's a rattler curled in the woodpile. I ask Sam to chop some wood in case it chills." Gifford then moves through a time period where it becomes obvious that the female telling the tale certainly knew about the rattler being IN the woodpile:
"Sam's putting on weight. I slather mayo on his baloney sandwiches. He can't resist baloney on Wonder Bread. I buy assorted doughnuts and leave them arranged on a plate in the kitchen. For supper I fry up steaks in butter and stuff twice-baked potatoes with cheddar and bacon. Ice cream for dessert, and plenty of it.
Sam complains of heartburn and rubs his left arm. I feed him antacids and light his cigarettes for him. You're a good wife, he says."
The last line of the story, after Sam's funeral, and another man is there offering to cut wood: "Underneath my black wool suit I wear new scarlet panties, bright as a flame."
Killer piece, Alicia!
Posted by: Katrina Denza | February 17, 2007 at 10:04 PM
Really an awesome piece, Alicia!
Posted by: Shelly | February 19, 2007 at 11:04 AM
Alicia never disappoints.
Posted by: Myfanwy Collins | February 21, 2007 at 08:51 AM
Nice, Alicia!
Posted by: T. J. Forrester | February 24, 2007 at 10:32 AM
Alicia rocks, it's true. Always great to read her stuff.
Posted by: Andy Roe | February 24, 2007 at 11:19 PM
Hey thanks everyone! I just saw this in an onanistic self-Google, and I'm touched!
Posted by: Alicia Gifford | April 03, 2007 at 02:25 PM