Book Review 2019-002
Premonitions by Elizabeth Schmuhl
2018 by Wayne State University Press, 60 pages
(I received an Advance Copy from the publisher).
Fifty-nine numbered poems over sixty pages, only one of them stretching itself to a second page. The titles of the poems numbers ranging from 7 through 134 with no discernable pattern to them (are there seventy-five--or more--that were culled from this collection, and if so, why?). Again, this is what happens when you let somebody with an interest in statistics try to review writing, and especially poetry collections. These were some of our first thoughts when we began reading this collection, both back in the summer when we first received it, and again this past weekend as we re-read it again for this review. It wasn't long however before the words of Elizabeth Schmuhl began to congregate in our head and bump the idea of numbers and patterns right on out.
Schmuhl's poems are quick-hitting, but long-lasting. Reading this collection made us want to spend more time outside, to roll around in the dirt, to grow things, to get up and dance (and we do not EVER want to dance). Not many of the poems led us to think--she wants us to gleam this from that poem. What they did instead was create a feeling. One of a bit of loneliness, and desire to shed that loneliness through interaction with nature. The couple of times reading the collection on a quiet bench at the zoo seemed near perfect--amongst others yet alone, enjoying nature and that which was around us.
The collection title seems particularly appropriate. Reading the collection and being his by loneliness, by occasional depressive thoughts, the occasional coyote appearance both in the orchard and off in the distance leads to an ominous feeling--something bad feels to be coming around behind every tree, in every visit to the barn, and with every fruit or berry. It's really not until one has completed the book that the worry about something bad happening dissipates and even then the feeling hovers a bit.
Re-reading the collection again we found ourselves jotting down lines from damn near every poem:
Poem #7
My sweat evaporating, turning me more into me, disappearing
Poem #9
I'm getting better at not doubting myself
Poem #14
In the cherry orchard I offer myself to Earth
Poem #15
I shake them
out of my hair
while dancing
to the evening
sounds slowly
turning on
Poem #17
I go for walks in the peach orchard and pretend the trees are my friends
(EWN--we cannot deny walking through the zoo at times pretending the animals are our friends)
Poem #22
I'm lonely living
in this sea of leaves
Poem #26
Not even
a moth
has landed
one one of
my petals
Poem #69
I've been dancing again at night in the orchard
And that continues through the rest of the collection. Not a poem went by that something didn't jump out at us, that didn't make us think--frequently about our place in the world, among nature, among other people. The thoughts or actions from the poem's protagonists created a mood while reading the book. The word loneliness appears a bit too often in this review and it's more from a lack of a good vocabulary on our part than due to the poems as written. That feeling though mostly floats through the background of the poems and not direct from the woman (the speaker in these poems is a woman living on a farm--a pretty secluded one from what we readers know). It's something Schmuhl has done that is extremely impressive with this work--getting her readers to feel something without explicitly being told to do so. If it weren't twenty-some degrees outside right now, we'd probably sit out on the porch this evening and dip back into Premonitions. We definitely will do so over and over in the future.
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